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Re: The Afterlife
Wow! I want to hear more about the adventures of this man and what he does with his he forced to haunt his house or did he haunt it out ...
Oct 5, 2021 -
Re: October poem, don't really have a name yet (TW: ghosts)
Cool poem.I feel like this has something more to it than Halloween.I wonder what kind of person this narrator is to have past problems and associate them with favorite parts ...
Oct 3, 2021 -
Re: go enjoy your life
It’s short,but sweet.I like this poem.It’s telling us to go and enjoy your favorite lines in the poem is when you tell us,the readers,that we are beautiful.A simple compliment can ...
Oct 2, 2021 -
Re: Kendyll Nurse
This is a cool description for a character.I’m excited to see the adventures this girl goes on.Yes,pets always on first before boys,that’s true.She sounds realistic and that’s good.She’s like
Oct 1, 2021 -
Re: Captain Cheat
This is an exciting story.I can’t wait to see if this becomes a was interesting to see the characters get irritated by each other after playing one match.Will this blow ...
Sep 30, 2021 -
Re: end of the world et cetera et cetera
This poem,about the end of the world,is interesting.Especially from the perspective of a person who doesn’t seem to care about anyone or anything.It’s almost as if they knew and wanted ...
Sep 29, 2021 -
Re: Beautiful Mistake (Time Travel Short Story)
This was an interesting story about finding family.It’s beautiful,yet sad to think that living in the 1800s would be better for Rose than living in her time period.I was just ...
Sep 28, 2021 -
Re: You Fool
Wow! This relates to how every person on Earth might feel.Someone’s blind ignorance to tragedy and terror is the real threat in this world.Just saying whatever can change the world ...
Sep 27, 2021 -
Re: growing-down
Moving poem.It’s thought-provoking and questions the meaning of life.I think everyone has thought this way favorite lines in the poem are:”Everything feels quite scripted.” People have definitel
Sep 26, 2021 -
Re: A nighttime blur said 'free us from the writing article'
Cool poem! This seems like the kind of thing that would be in a positive poetry book.I love reading these favorite lines in the poem are:”Let us dream in our ...
Sep 25, 2021 -
Re: Your Beauty
Lovely poem! I love the message you’re giving us,the readers.That we are beautiful no matter what.It’s beautiful and favorite parts of the poem are these lines:”Find a mirror” and “Not ...
Sep 24, 2021 -
Re: The Stinging Tang
Cool poem! I believe this is about leaving and the scent of home never leaving favorite parts in the poem were these lines:”The night is gone” and “the waking death” ...
Sep 23, 2021 -
Re: nightingales
I enjoyed this poem.I loved the message of how life can be reborn from the ashes and destruction of only we helped the world favorite parts were these lines:”We may ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: Your Grave is Empty.
I liked the poem.Anything a that has to do with graves or just had that Halloweenie feel to it,then,I’m going to read seems to me that the narrators feels grief ...
Sep 21, 2021 -
Re: I am the Invisible
What a lovely expresses the loneliness of not being noticed,yet,not knowing how to break it,because it’s so easy to live by favorite parts were these lines:”Because I am a ghost ...
Sep 20, 2021
