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Re: All-American (Witch) Girl:Two
I don’t know if you remember me,but I commented on your last story about Minnie.I’m liking this story about the witch girl so far and I’m excited to see it ...
Sep 19, 2021 -
Re: Lost time
I loved this poem.I like to read these types of poems,talking about love and time.There is a certain magic to it and that’s what this favorite parts in the poem ...
Sep 18, 2021 -
Re: Missing you in Maine
I like this poem and the meaning of missing someone so favorite lines were at the start of the poem:”..I started writing this poem.I wanted to write that you were ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: Tree War
This was a very interesting story.I could see this as a Disney animation.I loved how you humanized the birds,it really makes the story more fun,to imagine them wearing pajamas and ...
Sep 16, 2021 -
Re: benevolence
Lovely poem.I love it the message that you are giving us,that maybe the god (or gods) are showing kindness to us by giving us the simplest things in life,like trees ...
Sep 15, 2021 -
Re: [Light floods in- - -]
This poem was short,but sweet.Now,the lights could mean anything.They could be taken literally,as in actual lights or they could be the small glimmer of hope that is in everyone’s life,which ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: An Odyssey of Love
What a beautiful poem! Your description beautifully explains perfectly the meaning of love and how it can change us for the favorite lines were these last ones:”The water was honey,sugar ...
Sep 13, 2021 -
Re: The Years of the Morning Light (Prelude)
I wonder what will happen with Jina and Chiku.This is an exciting story and I can't wait for it to continue! My favorite part was when they accidentally bumped into ...
Sep 12, 2021 -
Re: All-American (Witch) Girl: One
I love reading about witches,magic and mayhem,So,I'd thought I'd give this story a try.I liked it so far.I can't wait to see what happens to Minnie and what will become ...
Sep 11, 2021 -
Re: A Tisket, A Tasket
hmm...Suspenseful,interesting story here.I'm not sure if the protagonist is a hero or a villain.Maybe they're both.Who knows? I wonder what the story is it about someone who murders people that ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: Terra
Mesmerizing poem.I love how you describe the sky as a place "Where the view never ends." It makes it seem like there is a whole world in the sky that ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: Stage Fright
I enjoyed this poem.I love how in the end,when the person leaves,they felt as if they were being shows how damaged they are on the inside for being on a ...
Sep 8, 2021 -
Re: Blue
I enjoyed this poem talking about the color blue and how it could be more than just a color.It's lovely and poetic! My favorite parts were these lines:"Blue is the ...
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: To See You Again
Cool poem.I like how the character reminiscences about the past and how things were easier back then.We all want to go back to when things were favorite parts are these ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Not here for now
Good tells us,the readers,that the devil isn't evil and probably never even was.He only wants us to live favorite parts were these lines:"Oh,I lived life wrongly.Only thing I achieved was ...
Sep 5, 2021
