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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: In the Dark 1/2

    You%u2019re welcome! It looks like you write really cool stuff so I%u2019ll read some of your stories!

    Nov 4, 2022
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: You Fell In Love Again, Silly Idiot

    Oh okay. Thanks for telling me. You%u2019re welcome!

    Oct 11, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The origin of Vampircone6783

    Okay! As a matter of fact I am searching for Mr.Lincoln Alex. But no need to know about that%u2026 My dear mother is the only one with the sixth sense ...

    Oct 3, 2022
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Who cares? (Gabriel’s loneliness)

    Thanks a lot! I edited the song a bit.

    Oct 1, 2022
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Who cares? (Gabriel’s loneliness)

    Okay.

    Sep 30, 2022
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Who cares? (Gabriel’s loneliness)

    Thanks for your review. So about the line %u201CEven if I doubt and pray%u201D , would it sound better if I deleted the word %u201Cdoubt%u201D or %u201Cpray%u201D?

    Sep 30, 2022
  • Short Story » General, Horror Re: Hypoxia

    Okay, thanks!

    Sep 27, 2022
  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Horror Re: The Stupendous and Amazing Laughing Jack Song!

    Thankksss%u2026 (The story you are thinking of is called %u201CPoor Amy%u201D. It%u2019s on my profile). I think that you should Google his origin story and this one story with a ...

    Sep 24, 2022
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: Poor Amy..

    Thanks! I bolded the dialogue to make his voice sound deeper.

    Sep 24, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Narcissus

    Of course!

    Sep 23, 2022
  • Short Story » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Burning the Tear Flower

    You%u2019re welcome! :)

    Sep 22, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Father:Part Two

    Their story was spread around like an urban legend. That%u2019s how he knew about Natalie and Anika.

    Sep 22, 2022
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: The Bakery

    Ooooh creepy! Great job. :)

    Sep 22, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Two, Part One

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    Oh goodness…She’s sending Kim far, far away, to the house of crazies! Maybe her Dad is one of them. Maybe he (whoever he may be) is a necromancer and she’s ...

    Sep 20, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Rosalie’s story-The babysitter of Loraine

    Thanks for the tidbits!

    Sep 20, 2022


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