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Re: Lydia’s story
I didn%u2019t draw her myself.I used a character making app called %u201CGacha Club%u201D to help.I adjusted the size of the eyes and hair and picked the colors for skin/clothes/eyes etc.I ...
Aug 28, 2022 -
Re: Lydia’s story
Thanks for your review! I have a list of the stories in order to help: 1.It%u2019s all a bit tragic isn%u2019t it? 2.Maisie and Mallory%u2019s demise 3.Lydia%u2019s story 4.Michael%u2019s story ...
Aug 28, 2022 -
Re: hot cicada summer
No, not really any critiques.
Aug 28, 2022 -
Re: May’s story
The series in order: 1.It%u2019s all a bit tragic isn%u2019t it? 2.Maisie and Mallory%u2019s demise 3.How curious.. 4.Michael%u2019s story 5.Lydia%u2019s story 6.Heather and Loraine have splendid fun!
Aug 27, 2022 -
Re: Veni, Vidi, Vici
I’ve come back to this fanfic.I can’t wait to see Regulus’ villainy come into play.I feel sorry for him.I’m sure Sirius didn’t intend for his younger brother to be hurt ...
Aug 25, 2022 -
Re: somewhere, folded in under the horizon
Yup! Exactly how I viewed the second poem.
Aug 21, 2022 -
Re: My dearest Denise..
Thanks for your review! I will definitely take out that word.
Aug 21, 2022 -
Re: I love you, father! (William’s song)
Thanks for the review!
Aug 19, 2022 -
Re: Alexander and Mallory stories
Listen to %u201CCarousel%u201D by Melanie Martinez (Creepy version) uploaded by the Youtuber %u201CAyden%u201D while reading this.I imagine Mallory singing this with Alexander in the background.
Aug 19, 2022 -
Re: Alexander and Mallory stories
I deleted the fun facts and put the thing about Katie seeing ghosts in the actual story. Another thing is that anyone who has faced him has feel terrified, sad ...
Aug 19, 2022 -
Re: Alexander and Mallory stories
The circuses aren%u2019t connected.When Loraine spoke to Alexander, his ghost appeared at the carnival where Mallory haunted and that was how they were reunited. Loraine and her family were out ...
Aug 19, 2022 -
Re: Poor Amy..
Thank you so much for your review.
Aug 17, 2022 -
Re: Dementis: Chapter 1
I don%u2019t think it was cringe. I may have some older works that are cringe, but I own it because I wrote it and had fun with it. And if ...
Aug 17, 2022 -
Re: I love you, father! (William’s song)
William is talking to himself in the beginning and throughout the song.He cannot actually tell his Dad these feelings, as he is too busy and wouldn%u2019t pay attention to him ...
Aug 15, 2022 -
Re: How curious..
She%u2019s five in this story. I feel like you can imagine however you want her to look.Whatever would suit the character.
Aug 10, 2022
