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Re: Two little girls-Leona and Amelia’s song
SPOILER ALERT: The ringmaster of the circus ends up burning their home.The girls die in it.Their parents get out.Their parents have to live with their death.
Aug 10, 2022 -
Re: My dearest Denise..
Gabriel will have to decide for himself if he wants to move on and get a happy ending. Thanks for a review!
Aug 10, 2022 -
Re: How curious..
I just thought..what you picture Loraine looking like in your head?
Aug 10, 2022 -
Re: How curious..
Thanks for your review! I will definitely come up with different types of stories in the future.
Aug 9, 2022 -
Re: The Sky-Whale
Lol. Great poem!
Aug 7, 2022 -
Re: I wish
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Aug 5, 2022
We wish love were as easy and right as it is so often written and imagined.Some things are to be kept.Some are to be let go.We aren’t responsible for our ... -
Re: I wish
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Aug 5, 2022
We wish love were as easy and right as it is so often written and imagined.Some things are to be kept.Some are to be let go.We aren’t responsible for our ... -
Re: If the entire sun burned out of the sky (when) would you know?
Alright.I will try that.
Jul 30, 2022 -
Re: Maisie & Mallory’s demise
At the last part where Mallory is speaking to Heather,Heather and her older sister May were out for a day.This was before Heather and Loraine became friends.Mallory and Heather were ...
Jul 26, 2022 -
Re: Maisie & Mallory’s demise
The entire family will need a therapist after this.
Jul 26, 2022 -
Re: Maisie & Mallory’s demise
Thank you so much for reading! I edited that sentence. Yes,Mallory is strange isn%u2019t she?
Jul 26, 2022 -
Re: It’s all a bit tragic isn’t it?
I should also point out that Maisie used to beat him with a baseball bat,resulting in him forgetting certain things.When she turned twelve she switched to a broom because she ...
Jul 24, 2022 -
Re: It’s all a bit tragic isn’t it?
He is speaking to both friends in that dialogue. When I say his bones are sticking out,I%u2019m saying he%u2019s gaunt.Sickly thin. Thank you for reading!
Jul 24, 2022 -
Re: The clown and the little girl:Part two
Thanks for your review! I have intended for her name to be spelled with one r.
Jul 23, 2022 -
Re: What love feels like
You%u2019re very welcome.
Jul 11, 2022
