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Thanks so much for your review and I will take those things into consideration! I love that you first thought this was a fairytale,I love that kind of stuff!

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Ah yes,fire alarms were created to help us,yet they do more harm than good,with their screeching noises annoying us out of our perfect calmness.I have to say,this poem was hilarious! ...

Okay,thanks.

You%u2019re welcome%u2019

Alright,I%u2019ll clear some things up: 1st husband.Ipos (Vanessa was too young to know and remember him,but she will fight him in the future.Her biological father.) 2nd husband.Noah (The father of ...

Ha! This poem! (Well,it’s not really a poem,but still) I myself used to have long hair before I cut it.These are real horror sentences.Forget Stephen King and H.P. Lovecraft,this stuff ...

I enjoyed reading this poem about a girl on the wire.I have a theory that the girl is the soul of another girl who didn’t focus on the present and ...

Ah,thanks for reading! Noah is the sweet guy Moira met before Mark.She knows he is the son of the devil,but still doesn%u2019t care for him.Noah is Lucifer%u2019s father,Mark is the ...

Ah,such a cute tale on a sweater! When getting items from a thrift shop,sometimes you’ll wonder what stories they have on them.That’s with anything.When you get a new house that ...

Hmm..I don%u2019t really think it needs to be improved. Aspect I enjoyed? I liked how it was made,the poem.I thought it was going to be like most poems here,but it ...

I%u2019m past it,thanks.%u2728

Ah,we all want to live in a fairytale.We’d all want to escape from the real world,as reality can hurt us.I think it’s described nicely,where the conclusion is that life isn’t ...

Cool.

I actually updated this origin story,clearing up some of your questions! Tell me what you think.

Resting happens so they can regain their powers,gain energy.