creeperfeverdreams

hmm%u2026maybe you could describe where they are or have the detention scenes happen later. Or talk a little about the characters before building it up. But I%u2019m not a professional, ...

Thx for reading and the advice!

You%u2019re right. She%u2019s only a kid who was dealing with this. Thx for reading!

So her friends really did burn, but Nina dreams about it and relives the moment frequently. Thx for reading and advice!

I think my A/N autocorrected her name wrong. Thx for reading!

I%u2019m glad you enjoyed it. ^v^

Yw!

Thank you! I love to write about these different worlds and I%u2019m happy you enjoy reading about them. Maybe one day they%u2019ll be in physical print. ^v^

I was also writing this in real time so by the time the second part was out I was working on this one and waiting to publish this. But thx ...

I%u2019m glad you enjoyed reading this and thx for the advice! I wanted their friendship to feel like it was realistic but also not have them act out of character ...

Thx for reviewing and advice! I%u2019m glad you like the characters!

Okay, I will. ^v^ thx for reading. :>

Love the profile pic btw!

glad you liked it and thx for the advice! :}

Thanks for the review and your advice!