crescent

Hello. I like the chracters names. They're unique but not too exotic. The idea sounds interesting. I'd love to see a full chapter. Like etinarcadiaego said, I'm sensing a vampire ...

Hi. Crescent was here. I would review, but you said ((Thanks for the review guys! If you've got anything to mention that nobody else has, feel free. This is the ...

WHOAH!!!! This is amazing like everyone said. The bluriness made it cool. What type of paint did you use?

Well, that was unexpected. I like how you created something totally new and the whole "don't trip" idea. I thought they were like barbies at first. Lol. You proved me ...

Lol. :P

:) RHYMES!!!! :) This was sweet. Good work Elfy!!! -Cressy

I can feel tears coming...

EEEP! :) This was so pretty, JD!!!!! I'm sorry that happened though... It's nice how it's not all cliche-y though. :) :) :) *likes* -Cressy

Hey Matt ^_^ ! I like the idea for this short story. There a just a few typos (ig you spell "off" as "of" a couple of times and you ...

No, not particularly. I thought leperchauns were tiny little people that go around pinching people on St. Patrick's day if they don't wear green xP That's interesting. Did Lamhfhada have ...

Romanticsm!!! WHOOO!!!! lol. Do you believe in leperchauns? Oh yeah, I almost forgot to mention, "Welcome to YWS!!!" -Cressy

Thanks Everyone. Jen: That's what I thought too xP when I saw the picture online! I was like I wonder what would happen if the person fell, would the girl's ...

:) Good job Elfy!!! It was really pretty. :)

Hey Classy! Good job on your first charcoal exploration. :) You go pirate! Here's what I thought: 1: I thought it was the bangs that made it sort of awkward. ...

Thank you Cassi and Emily! :)