crestfallen

Can someone please tell me how to post these without the stupid double spacing..the first time I posted on this site it was fine but now all of a sudden ...

I think I’ve held you long enough I think I’ve kept you high enough I’m about to collapse now I’m about to crumble down Be glad I’ve held you for ...

I'm surprised that 22 people read this and only 1 (besides me) responded. I don't understand why people read but don't respond either positive or negative. But this was a ...

A very well balanced song. It was really wonderful reading it and I look forward to reading more work from you.

I didn't send this song looking like this. I don't ever use spaces after each sentence. For some reason this site posted it looking like that.

I don’t understand why everything falls out Of places that we’ve thought we could keep high enough Could you explain because I can’t now? Would I complain because it’s too ...

Your dad should only "let you go" when you turn 18 not at the age of 14..lol

I wonder if you're talking about God in this song. It was an okay song though

I agree with Razcood...I think that's the person's name. If you don't want to say the F word then don't put "F The world" that part of the song was ...

I wonder if you intend to sing the "Why can't you see" part like Tyler Swift or something. For some reason when I read that part of the song I ...

Some parts of the song were okay. However, it seemed to be dragging on a bit and I had to force myself to finish it. I like the concept of ...

I liked the lyric, good job. And perhaps it's short it written form but when sung he could always repeat something from the lyric to make it longer.

who's the bad man and what's he going to do?

It would have been better without the instruments that you intend to play in parentheisis. I also don't understand why this was in the rating 18. There's nothing here that ...

Hmm, I did't really like it that much. It was kind of juvenile coming from an 18 year old. Sorry