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Banned for using "like," as in the American colloquialism, in a post.

5/10 Weird.

Your awesome because you are awesome. (and because you are in the same reviewing team as me :D )

Banned for joining YWS before me.

This is a really good story. I liked it. There are a few mistakes though. Most of them are probably just typos. Looking at the floor she felt the hollow ...

Party rock anthem (sorry I can't remember who it is by)

The News on tv.

On myth busters they made a cannon and a boat out of duct tape.

Hello CuteJackRussel! I think this poem is great. It has alot of emotion. Just a couple of things. It all happened in a blur, I tried to keep calm and ...

Tree

I like this poem. It's really good. In the last stanza, you changed the rhyming pattern, which didn't quite fit. Apart from that, it is great. Keep writing! :D

Banned for paying people to be in your location and your custom title.

9/10 Clever.

Thanks for the help guys! They are really helpful. And lilymoore, thanks for the dancing/jogging jelly beans. I love them. :D

Can I be a cupcake with rainbow or striped icing and with a cherry on top please? :D