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cyancheshire

  • Other » General, General Re: Darkness

    I really liked this. I really did. If it's what I'm thinking, are the demons representing depression? If I'm just being clueless, I'm sorry. =P She's alone and she hates ...

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: alone

    I love poems that give emotional and personal appeal. They're very pleasant to read. There are a few mistakes, I think. But there is a light At the end of ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Blues Man

    I really loved this! It has a kind of mysterious feel to it. Just the name sucked me in. I think you should be just a tad more specific as ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: No More Judging

    The message of it was amazing. I love things like that - that show those kinds of messages where it just leaves you in awe and you're just like, "Wow. ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Stardust

    I really like this. It's so straight-forward, and I love the story in it. I've gone through a situation like that before, where we were just best friends and considered ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Math...mwahahahah

    I absolutely hate math with a constant passion, so I can totally relate to this. This was very well written, and I love the little "alas!" and "-indeed-". Those two ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: On Going War

    Wow, this poem was very vigorous and emotional! I love it. It's confusing, but in a good kind of way, like it's a mystery or something. I love how there's ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I cut myself

    Oh wow! I really liked this. It describes it so well. I've had experience with cutting; my friend did it, and she had no idea why she'd do it. This ...

    Jun 30, 2011


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