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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Tales of a Common Bus Driver

    Hey there! This was great, each character was so different and well-explained even down to the smallest detail. I agree with a previous review though that there really isn't much ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Chains.

    Yes, write more! I loved your story, aside from some punctuation errors, I thought you had a good ending! It was a good story, and its subject is right up ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Limondis' Revenge

    You reviewed mine so I'm here to review yours! I normally don't care for fantasy fiction but you had me interested, and I never got bored. Well done and very ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Old Poem

    I just finished reading/reviewing your Russian Roulette story and I found the link to this, to my surprise it was you again! I definitely think your strengths lean more towards ...

    Nov 3, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Old Story

    Hey there, Can't decide whether I like this or not. I don't really get it and that's making it harder to like. It has potential but it needs some work. ...

    Nov 3, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Frozen Love, Heated Pain

    Hey there, I don't really know how to say this. :) Well let's just say I posted something a few hours ago in Historical Fiction. New idea, been swimming around ...

    Nov 3, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: I Was One Of Them

    Please review and give me your opinions! Winds screamed their way across the wide expanse of open ground. The sky was an angry shade of blackish-grey, but I suppose it ...

    Nov 3, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: An Immigrant's Tale

    Yes it is, sorry it's been a while. My computer won't let me remove it and put it where it belongs for some reason.

    Nov 2, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Of a Hungry Fiend (English Homework)

    Bravo! Nicely written. I'm not really a fan of Beowulf but it was exciting and it captured my attention from the beginning. *daydreamer

    Nov 1, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Random Bits and Pieces

    Hey! First of all may I just say that your opening paragragh read like a torture scene from a Saw movie which unfortunately I had the unfortunate pleasure of witnessing ...

    Nov 1, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Funeral

    hey there! I don't really have time for a total review but my first impression was that your story was interesting. The title peaked my interest and when I clicked ...

    Nov 1, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Heaven

    hey there! I liked this a lot! I'd just like to say that I like your ending with the statement about the doll, it seems right that a little girl ...

    Nov 1, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Red roads through Gettysburg

    Hey there! I thought your story was pretty good! Here are the problems I had with it: 1. There were a lot of spelling errors. 2. The journal entries seemed ...

    Nov 1, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: An Immigrant's Tale

    I don't know if anyone here will remember me but I'm back for another go :) This is a story that's been floating around in my head for a couple ...

    Nov 1, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: What musical album has affected your writing most?

    Hmmm.... this is hard. If I absolutely had to choose: Parts of the ''Defiance'' Soundtrack, (particularly the song ''Exodus'') Parts from ''The Cider House Rules'' soundtrack, Regina Spektor, and Pete

    Dec 17, 2009


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