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Wow. Thank you people for the help~ I really appreciate it. XD

Scene Kids & Murder Scenes A short story His words continued to fade. Everything was gone in an instant. Everything they fought for. Gone. Blood gushed out his mouth; his ...

Wow, nice chapter... But, I think you can get more points if you post it... not edit it and paste it in there... Anyway, thats a cool new chapter (Poor ...

Yay-ness! Finally, a Naruto fic! Okay, I was in a state of awe. That is cool. And I also noticed that people here are more into OCs... some communities actually ...

Hello Ninja-san! Nice story so far, I think this is going to have a good plot. But, I agree with Ink, show us, don't tell us. Probably more description would ...

Hello there, I see you've uploaded a prologue! There it was hanging and gliding back and forth , the villain upside down hanging by a single rope that kept him ...

Actually, I like the opening, the whole philosophy thing about love. But I think you've got to make it less descriptive... You compare a lot too, and that's a bad ...

(Hey, there's a prologue before this...) Chapter I: The Damned and The Broken --January 10, 2007-- Terra Fauntree drank from the glass as she desperately tried to get rid of ...

Well maybe you can just ignore the fact that I said present tense sounds awkward.

I made this one up when there was nothing else to do. Basically I was killing time... I didn't want to be long, but it ended up that way. I ...

That's a nice plot actually. Writing from a journalist's point of view and probably falling in love with Super Boy or... Jason. Maybe if you could fix some parts and ...

Hello, its me again. Lol. I reviewed your story already! PM me anytime... Welcome to YWS, it's a cool site...

Bonjour!!! Hi, I'm bullet, I love vampires too! And yes, your english isn't bad at all. Hey, if you got any vamp stories, ask me to review them!!! PM me ...

I'm gonna do a major review on this one. Why? Cause it's my bedtime but I can't sleep. Hope you can... read it... In my sleep, my breathing quickens (CHANGE ...

I love it, it's so nice! I agree with Atariel-san, the repeating title is kinda cool. Loved it!