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  • Article / Essay » General, Review Re: Technology Now and Then

    Nice essay.Some advice i think you need to spend more time developing your thoughts as it seems kind of rushed at the moment. Try instead to focus on just a ...

    Oct 3, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, Review Re: Technology of life

    Wow! Nice ESSAY! just some correction about the punctuation marks and grammars and some advicey ou just need to elaborate more your essay. But still it's nice. Work Well done ...

    Oct 3, 2013


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