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Re: Two by Two
I think this is a clever idea. The thing that i find detracts from the overall piece is the rhyming problem you have. You go in and out of rhyming ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: #1
This story sounds like it is going to be very good however i found bits of it a little repetitive and confusing. the first paragraph starts off very well. I ...
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: My Own Personal Haiku
Very good. Cleverly done. Like others i dont think it is a dramatic poem but i loved it. One point though Hey . . . wait a second It is ...
Dec 2, 2008