darchoco

sadly, after this poem, I could never seem to write poetry again--not trying to be dramatic or anything.

Hey thanks for the critique. Just a quick note here, he has that spear for a reason. Few others are going to be carrying around medival weapons and rather will ...

well definitly this was a rough draft to an intro of one of my stories I am working on. So Ya I will fix and repost ASAP

thanks for the slap in the face. I will adjust accordingly, but just to say, it is a bit of a prologue because it will affect his future actions and ...

I knew it was completely cliche but sometimes its good to bring back the classics right? :wink: anyway, Imagery is usually my thing anyway. I will definitly take that into ...

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Thanks. THis was a rough rough draft, and i want it perfect. I want to give it to someone :)