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Re: The Vampire Diaries: The Awakening and The Struggle
Alright so these two books (which happen to be rolled into a beautiful two in one package currently) are about a fanged love triangle. A girl named Elena comes across ...
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: Fallen Angel
*Insert Dramatic Music Here* Cliffhanger!! Okay, well I seem at a loss as to suggest any changes because I thought it was ammmaaaazzzzzzaaaaazzzzing. And now that I've said that someone ...
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: It Might Not be Colorful, But At Least it'd be Real
Okay so I've packed away my torture devices and therefore I won't be spearing your story, putting it over a fire to roast :P. Since Sam covered a lot of ...
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: One Night fixed up
Okay so I think this story definitely has potential, but I agree and disagree with maiko_koto. There are parts in your story that should be separated to enhance the flow ...
Jan 30, 2008