deathwave1

Thanks for the follow! Middle school English class is actually the reason I started writing poetry, so all my poems from that year mean a lot to me, even if ...

I loved this! The theme was beautiful, and the ending line expressed it perfectly. The speaker's descent into cancer was expressed in a fairly realistic fashion as well.

Thanks! My poetry tends to be more lighthearted than most on here, so I wasn't sure about posting this, but I'm glad to see there was a positive response. More ...

I'm probably newer her than you, so don't worry. Anyway, as I replied to Augustus, it was meant to be in stanzas. Formatting issues. Thanks for dropping by!

Thanks for the input! Originally, the piece was in stanzas. Somewhere in the copy and paste from Google Docs, they were lost. The brackets were meant to separate the names ...