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Wow, that was interesting. I totally agree with the other comments, we need more info about Tammy and why she is crazy. But I do like it and want to ...

My eyes were immediately drawn to the huge gold figure above the stage; it was Oscar. The band were playing under him, filling the hall with the music hundreds of ...

Thanks for the critiques, I really appreciate it. I have been procrastinating about posting the edited version because I have been making little changes for ages. But here it is, ...

Thats so sad, poor Evie. But like Sokool15 said, please, please do not make her have an affair with Jack. Thats just not cool. I liked it a lot. Keep ...

My Top 5: 1) Gilmore Girls (I'm so sad now it has finished) 2) Ugly Betty 3) House 4) Everwood (the first season was the best) 5) Neighbours

Lol, now I understand :lol:

I recommend novels by David Eddings, especially the ones with Sparhawk in them, I think he is a cool character.

I think I'll die if I can't look at portfolios. That's the only way I find chapters by certain people! Yeah thats what I do. I was all happy that ...

I've read it. I thought it was really sad, but it has an awesome first line, what a hook. Also it was published earlier under a different name, The White ...

American: Druggist LOL I've never heard this term before but it made me picture somebody growing something green and illegal.... The only difference I ever really knew about was the ...

I was on another young writers site, which I totally just found again. I couldn't believe it. When I tried to search for it, I thought I'd never find it, ...

I like it :) It is really easy to read and interesting.

Go Girl

And here is where it starts to get funky for me. I don't know what it's like to be sixteen, and I don't know what a happy family is like, ...

People may get fussy about being called "Christians" when they are a specific denomination, but for me it's fine. I do have an issue with that, I am a Christian ...