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WOW, snoink is that spanish? My poetry finally makes sense!!! Nudillo Drag'r - Barreta pulida Bastante bastante, en medias del fishnet. cinta del No-palillo; ayudará al remeter-ins. Una bebida y ...

I say you view my poem titled "to set an example" and combine it with this, and we got something really KICK-A**! *Let's not curse in the comments and be ...

I would concentrate on punctuation. 30 lines is 30 lines, but add the darn punctuation. EVERYTHING you have is pretty awesome, but I run out of breath reading it. HELP ...

Ok, if no body wants to play the game, then I vote for "kiss the girl" it is the best description of a male humbled by beauty.... if there ever ...

I dont critique, but I will tell you what I think. And I wont be an ass about either. Let me know.

To buy my time, I simply took another bite of my oatmeal and sipped my orange juice. My insides were burning. Ok, this says to me that the food and ...

YO!!!!! That is an incredible idea! I LOVE IT! SNOINK IS AWESOME FOR LAUNCHING THIS THREAD TO SEE WHO CAN WRITE THE NEXT DISNEY SONG< YAAAAAAAAA!! HOORAY! Ok, but ummmm..... ...

I -LOVE- Cliche'. I say dont worry about it. However, I was lovin the flow up until "but actually,". I think But. Would be more powerful at that point in ...

Grab a piece of paper, close your eyes, and grab a pen, write down the first word that pops into your head. then fold the paper in half, repeat step ...

I'll lose some things I do not need: that tag, these toys, this plaited lead. I'll ditch some things I cannot use: that dish, those cans, these rawhide chews. I'll ...

This was a quick hit. I wish I had more of a variety in the chorus, but I simply dont have a full grasp of that part of society to ...

1/10. refuse to censor yourself and one of the greatest... ballziest... "take-no-shit" and toe the line of instanity military leaders ever, and you got yourself a 10/10. SEMPER-FI!!

Confusion over my last post is understood, let me elaborate. Ok, to start, read the following: -I was feeling ill yesterday, but once I ate something I felt better. -I ...

So I guess that would mean it is an internet thingy, thanks Lama, *giggle* teeheehee *giggle-giggle*. (DAMN, you shouldn't make me laugh so hard, I think my gallbladder just exploded... ...

Hey, I think your moth is melting. (love the poem)