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  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Albino Maiden of Snow (With Recording!)

    Thanks for clearing it up about the "flat" thing. I guess that is a personal preference thing then about how open/closed you make things. I take after my mother in ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Albino Maiden of Snow (With Recording!)

    Thank you for clearing this up. =)

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Albino Maiden of Snow (With Recording!)

    Thanks for your comments, the reason I didn't say "Will she reveal them" is because he was expecting her to reveal more than just that. The whole thing is very ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Albino Maiden of Snow (With Recording!)

    Hi there, thank you for the review. I have to say that you're the first person to tell me that it sounds "flat" (upon re-reading your review I was wondering ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Albino Maiden of Snow (With Recording!)

    Hi there, thank you for the review. I know what you mean about lyrics being posted without videos/audio files. To me lyrics ALWAYS sound a bit cheesy when I read ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Albino Maiden of Snow (With Recording!)

    Hi there, thanks for your feedback. =) It's uncommon for Black Metal songs to have choruses, we tend to have more transitions in our song. Which is one reason why ...

    Jun 11, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Politics Re: Blood and Oil

    Hi Roxy, thanks for your comments. I made sure the words tie in with the beats, one syllable per each eighth note to be precise, so it does all fit ...

    Jun 8, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Literature Re: One Step Forward and Two Steps Back

    Post another article like this and I'll lunge across the table, beat you to death and boil your jewellery into a soup! XD Kidding dear, I love you. =)

    May 1, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Emo Joke Poem for Fafnir

    Thanks for the feedback, the thing is that I rushed this out in under three minutes to parody most of the depressing poems I see in the new work feed ...

    Apr 29, 2012
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Feelin' like I'm headed for a breakdown...

    I think that this is stolen from Matchbox 20.

    Apr 20, 2012
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: *Deleted*

    Hi, The song would last 5 minutes at the least in run-time as it is a slow grinding metal song, the lyrics are done in a deep dragged out gutteral ...

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Pocket riders.

    I love the abstract feel to this song, keep it up.

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Cm punk song (you have to know him to understand)

    I haven't watched the wrestling in a while but his self rightousness gets to me haha. He does a good job of playing his role.

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Another Song: in need of a title. Please suggest :)

    This is a nice acoustic song to play (I did play it) Subconscious Confession The above is what I would title this song if I wrote it.

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: deleated

    I can imagine this song being played in a dance club, which is good if that is what you are trying to achieve or how it was supposed to sound?

    Nov 2, 2009


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