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I like both poems, and the wording for obth of them are great. PS I'm no crique.

I've read it and it sad and happy, at parts all together it's a great poem.

Liz i see no probelm with you poetery, but this is the guy that is morbid so my opinion don't matter probably.

I've read it Liz, and yes i am going through all your poetery, only because some of it good and because i love you so much.

It did move too fast, but i liked it, probably because it was about a warrior.

This is great TBR and you say your no good at poetery, i think your magic.

I'll be straight, i've no idea what made you want to write this. Whatever it is i wish i could help. Bit morbid.

Your talking about one of the final fantasy games, i doubt no one heard of it. My guess is if it a fan fiction then probably you could i'm no ...

So far so good, i'll read the other chapter tommorow, but it getting intresting keep it up.

That was so good, i was wondering why this was in fantasy, now i know it's promising.

Yeah it could be a poem, it would probably be sadder as a poem.

That was brillant Dono, keep it up it is capivating.

That sad, but it does sound a good song

Not bad seems like their should more, know what i mean.

Godferry left Raphius Illkji and went into his cell without complaint; he sat down on the mouldy brown covers and his stone bed. And took out Lyre and played all ...