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Carry on it an intresting idea music magic, well i'm not going through for criticing, but it seemed good.

Very dramatic very good, can't see any problem anyway i don't critic.

Okay i read it an yep it good, it was a bit boring at the start though, an slot that part in where he see the foorprints that makes it ...

Well goodluck i thought as first it's be boring cause i hate cricket, but i just told my self to carry on reading, never regreted it at all.

Intresting story but i say ir more horror but that's up to you. What about this for the name The Shadow Blight

That Great TBR i can really see all that in the poem, well done.

That was magic espectilly like the rapper sevrvant stuck in the wrong age, an when Sam started piling on stuff to Frodo, an the healer dudes *breaths*.

Okay not bad but it was confusing or maybe that was me well hope it is just me.

I like blue Roses best

LOL Sureal you outdone ya self that brillant i love how ya make it sound normal Well done hope you win

Hey that great it was brilant an funny i like the end line to

All people who hate Knights will be put in thwe stocks an have rotten fruit and veg thrown at them (god i'm evil)

Not bad Hunter good rythem going through it

God that a good one DOWN WITH BUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Looks up inoccently smiling*

Not bad it was a great a great story but to easy to get bored oh well that all 9/10 well done