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Re: eventual farewell, my butterfly
Thanks so much for the review! This is really helpful. I will definitely use some of your advice, so thank you so much. I thought I did a better job ...
Apr 16, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 47
Same XD. I wish I could give Alexander a hug as well. Eyyy most of the time my theories are way off, so that'd be nice if I'm closer than ...
Apr 13, 2017 -
Re: eventual farewell, my butterfly
Lol hey, this was a fine review! Yeah, it's supposed to be a flower talking to a butterfly. I added a smell to the butterfly as if to say that ...
Apr 5, 2017 -
Re: A National and Family War: A Civil War Story
You're very welcome and I'm glad my advice helped!
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: The Bitter Truth
You're very welcome and I'm glad you can use my advice!
Mar 16, 2017 - Re: The Progeny: Chapter 46 Mar 13, 2017
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Re: Teach Us What We Lack
You're welcome lol. Oh yeah that makes more sense. I really like that line now that I understand it XD. Great job!
Mar 10, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 45
Yeah that's really true about Nico. Alexander really is such abs amazing character XD. Good, I'm glad they make you smile and this story is simply amazing! Aw I'll miss ...
Mar 9, 2017 -
Re: Strange Cycle of Possibilities and Disappointments
You're very welcome!
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: Fall From Grace: Chapter 1: Ari and Winter
You're welcome!
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: The lines from these hands
Hey! Yeah I like the use of repetition or parallelism a lot! You're welcome!
Feb 27, 2017 -
Re: Ascension Chapter 53-54 Original
You're welcome!
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Year Thirteen
You're very welcome!
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: (1) Snippets from my WIP, 'Five Emerge'
You're welcome! XD. You're a really good writer.
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: First 2,000 Words of an Unnamed Project
Alright, sweet! I can't wait!
Feb 26, 2017