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demib

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Tears of an Angel

    Thank you

    Mar 12, 2012
  • Lyrics » Health, Lyrical Re: Let's Talk About Sex

    Umm.. I should not be reading this.... Um How The Hell IS This supposed to be EDUCATIONAL??? no offense but but how? its very strange but good.

    Feb 28, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter Nine

    Creepy....I have not read the other chapters but this chapter. Oh yea this chapter is downright creepy...And I Love IT!!!!

    Feb 28, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: Excerpt of Twinkle twinkle little star

    I loved the sentence that says "What on earth are you doing, you bloody maggot!" that sentence i can see a person saying that in a british accent. Oh that ...

    Feb 28, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Angel Light

    I like it! i wanted to read more. it was kind of sad to have it end but, ya. It needs some editing but i dont want to bore you ...

    Feb 28, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: love

    This makes no sense... Maybe put some more detail into it?

    Feb 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: "Roses"

    I like it. I have a poem named roses, except is kind of sad.. but overall its very good.

    Feb 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Red

    Oh. O.O I like this one. Dark, beautiful! Keep writing!

    Feb 25, 2012
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Romantic Re: I'm Gonna Make You Laugh

    I agree more happiness in your poems now! I like this one!

    Feb 25, 2012
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Long Distance

    That is so cute! Im suprised at you AJ! I can literally sing this in my head!

    Feb 24, 2012
  • Lyrics » Politics, Realistic Re: Tongue In Cheek (ONLY 18 AND OVERS MAY VIEW. CONTAINS RACIST SLANG BUT ONLY FOR EFFECT.)

    Thats not awkward....( dont know if i spelled that right...)

    Feb 23, 2012
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: I Am No Whore

    Lol i guess thats true!

    Feb 23, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Unknown, Chapter 2

    I will try. It is a working porject cause i have school and not very much time alone.

    Feb 23, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Years of My Pain and Sorrow

    No it is fine! These are the kind of reviews I like!

    Feb 23, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Short Poems #3

    I agree a little happy spot popped out at the bottom!:)

    Feb 23, 2012


I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark.
— Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X