desmerize1819

Hey, faithlessfate, welcome. I'm Des. I like your poem and I see thet you have potential. Sometimes you can punctuate your entire poem or half or you can choose not ...

Hey, June, it's Desmerize. I liked this. In the fourth line though, you have the word "and" before " A silent lull..." and I think it slows it down a ...

Spark. I like it. It's really nice. For a moment i had experienced that funny feeling in my chest and stomach which only can be my emotional response to your ...

This has a true ring to it. Did this really happen? it was beautiful and I'm certain that every one who had a bestfriend who they may have told that ...