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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Being Alone

    Hey there! It was really good. The way you have written was really amazing. I could imagine each and every sentence when I read it. Though it's a simple plot, ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Smile, honey - you'll get sunshine.

    Hey! Its really a cute and innocent conversation :) I loved it. I did not understand the last sentence. Except that it was a really great work.. Keep writing :)

    Dec 2, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Fill-out form for access to Heaven.

    I really loved it :D I read this twice and still am laughing :D Especially this sentence made me laugh like a mad !!! ;) I like skiing over dead ...

    Dec 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Regrets

    Hey ! I really liked it. :) Your narration was pretty cool. Especially the first half was impressive then the second half.. It touched me. And anythin that touches our ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Dialogue

    Hey there! I liked all your dialogues, especially the second one.. All your dialogues are like arguments between two. Your characters must be like a Tom and Jerry :D Anyways ...

    Nov 29, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Just Laugh it all Away

    Lol.. I really enjoyed each and every lines. Some lines are very impressive which made me read twice or even thrice. And atlast I laughed like anything.. Even I had ...

    Nov 29, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A Bad dream come true

    That was really interesting :D Ofcourse every students mentality will be the same when they did not complete their work. You brought it out very well.. Keep writing what comes ...

    Sep 15, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dreams in Red

    Hey there! It was really creepy. Your descriptions are really good. I got the feel of real nightmare. Especially the time speeding up and slowing down part was good. The ...

    Sep 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Suicide

    Hey there, It was a pleasure reading your story. I have learnt some things from you as a writer. Even though its a simple plot you managed to hook the ...

    Sep 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1)

    Your writing is really amazing. Actually I have learnt many things from your writing. First I started reading it slowly but later when he struggles I started reading it fast ...

    Aug 3, 2011


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