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I've always been your fan, good peice of writing

Thanks lucrezia. An honest and worthwhile review. I will learn a lot from it. I will expand on this topic in the near future. Then just repost it or edit ...

Hey thanks! Glad you liked it. People like you keep me going. What is writing without readers? Nothing. Thanks again

Hey thanks! Glad you liked it. People like you keep me going. What is writing without readers? Nothing. Thanks again

So sorry it didn't it didn't inspire. You are completely right! I did rush it and it too short. I was just so eager to write something and be criticised. ...

Hi Lucrezia, Some good dialogue here. Although i haven't read the previous chapters i can't wait for the next one!!! Make sure you post it sooner that soon...ish :) Keep ...

LOL. Great. I like it. Good work.

Ok, i get the title. But I still don't get the line. "My fill" is what i don't understand. Grammar mistake maybe. What fill is yours?

Thanks FinnWinterfall, glad it made you happy. Yeah, I've got to made a lot of amendments. I didn't pay much attention to the structure at all. Just kept the thoughts ...

Hi citrus, glad you like the emotions, Thanks :d

Heys, thanks for review! Oh thanks for telling me about the caps. I'm new so I'll be awareofthatnext time.thanks again. :d

Wow, now that's a review! Surprisingly everything you have said is very very true. It's like you read my mind,saying some thing. Ok, now theres a lot I need to ...

Thanksssunshine , thanks for the compliment. Means a lot to me. Btw I did mean but. Auto correct is annoying on my phone. I''LL CHANGE IT. STORY ABOUTTHE CAPS.

Hey, nice poem. Just one line i don't understand "but now I wish you'd die to my fill" Another thing. Can you explain the title? I don't quite get it. ...

Beautiful description. I can see everything like its in front of me. I like the concept of silence :) Good work. Keep writing