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Very nice. I enjoy the uniqueness you put into this poem. Dogs here with a couple little critiques. Firstly, this is just me which makes this a little bias..., personally ...

Heyyyy dogs here. In my opinion i was always a fan of short poetry, although most people i meet don't like it that much so its always nice to see ...

Hey Frazol, dogs here just giving a couple small pointers. Firstly i really enjoy this poem. It has a simple plot and idea and you convey it well threw your ...

Hehe catchy. I like it. Dogs here just throwing out a few pointers. it flows very nicely but actuly i really dont think it should be in lytic poetry. I ...

OOOOOOOO i like! Hey Dogs here just giving your poem a little tiny pointers cause there is really very little wrong here. that is her heart, i mean - her ...

Hey dogs here! firstly i love your poem! i really do enjoy reading it, a simple achievable goal that seems just out of reach. Now i do, however, have some ...

Hiya dogs here. First of all I like it so far. Its a good starter but I think that maybe you should "beef" this chapter up. Personally what I enjoy ...

Okay quick things. Dogs here and the "How did i do it" kinda unncesiary. But anyways this sounds nice and i think it actully belongs in novels not short stories.... ...

Allrighty Dogs here. Well so far this is looking nice. Im a big fan of your other book you've written on YWS. But I can't really pass too much judgment ...

Okey dokey Dogs here and i just wanted to do the honors of being your first critic on YWS. Also there is a 2:1 ratio in which you must review ...

Whoa nizice! Dogs here and I really enjoyed your story. It has an incredibly strong beginning and my favorite style of a prologue. I also liked the discription of some ...

Hiya dogs here Okey dokey down to business. First of all this is a great POEM. I believe this should actully go in Lytic poetry opposed to short stories because ...

Hiya dogs here. Okey dokey you got some dang good writing I'll give you that. The plot line is solid and it seems like a very concrete idea... however, being ...

GO PERRY HES BY FAR MY FAVORITE CHARACTER! But down to business. Yes those commas. There dangerous they are watch out for them. The story line/plot line seems a little ...

Okey Dokey Dogs here. A couple quick things about this. 1 this is poetry not a song. 2 having a chorus right after anouther chorus dosnt work so well. The ...