double.think

Hi again BlueShift - You've already recieved some very lengthy good reviews but i just wanted to add a few things. Firstly I really like your idea of the colour ...

Hey Nice story. It is an interesting concept writing from an animal's point of view. I agree with everyone else as well. Have you considered changing it to the present ...

Hi Blueshift, I love the first paragraph of this story, straight away i'm in the woods with your characters. You use different senses very well; describing the smell, look and ...

Any tips would be much appreciated. Cheers. Sitting in Mamie’s Kitchen Mamie frowns at the oven, ‘It’s just not hot. Why isn’t it hot like that?’ She opens the door ...

Anything Radiohead. And also some Angus and Julia Stone goes down nicely.

Hello I really like the tone of this story, and i was alongside the character. Just one thing, you tend to use a lot of cliched phrases in your description; ...

For me, this really works as a first chapter, i was instantly interested from the first paragraph. I especially like the detail you put in, stuff like the smell being ...