double.think

Hi again BlueShift - You've already recieved some very lengthy good reviews but i just wanted to add a few things. Firstly I really like your idea of the colour ...

Hey Nice story. It is an interesting concept writing from an animal's point of view. I agree with everyone else as well. Have you considered changing it to the present ...

Hi Blueshift, I love the first paragraph of this story, straight away i'm in the woods with your characters. You use different senses very well; describing the smell, look and ...

Hello I really like the tone of this story, and i was alongside the character. Just one thing, you tend to use a lot of cliched phrases in your description; ...

For me, this really works as a first chapter, i was instantly interested from the first paragraph. I especially like the detail you put in, stuff like the smell being ...