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Re: Scars In Blue: Part 1: Chapter 5: Shadows and Fire
Wow, cool story! I really like the idea of a princess who can hear the voices of flames and the mystery of her father's disappearance. I decided to start with ...
Sep 22, 2023 -
Re: Fault
Wow, ouch. This hit me in the feels. I totally relate to making everything my fault and blaming myself for the misdeeds of others. Thinking about it now we must ...
Sep 11, 2023 -
Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1
Hi, cool story. Can't wait to see where this goes. This gave me strange Harry Potter vibes with the normal seeming world while a hidden magic world hides just beneath ...
Sep 9, 2023 -
Re: The Witch Trainee, the Prince, and the Blue Dragon
What an incredible story! I like how you started by giving us the family situation of Yvonne. It really helped me understand the ending with the Hag's request and her ...
Sep 9, 2023 -
Re: Dragon
This story is very interesting. I originally decided to read it since I love dragons and often see them as very human like in their mannerisms. Very similar to your ...
Sep 9, 2023 -
Re: Angels and Gargoyles
Wow! I'm the kind of guy who loves a creature with a good heart and monstrous appearance. I've always believed that we judge too much on appearances and your poem ...
Sep 8, 2023 -
Re: Foxmaster- who is she really? intro
Hi Foxmaster! Been a while. Right off the bat I wanted to ask if this is the character your profile was based on or vice versa. I was really excited ...
Sep 6, 2023 -
Re: Wetfire- chapter 11
Well... That was unexpected. Never before has a story upended my expectations as many times or as extremely as yours, while still keeping a semi-coherent storyline. So has Silver lost ...
Jun 8, 2023 -
Re: Wetfire-chapter 10
Hi again, It's been a long time since my last chapter of Wetfire. Nice cliffhanger. I love prophecies in stories. One of my favorite lines about them is "one often ...
Jun 8, 2023 -
Re: Wetfire-Chapter Nine
Hi again! It's been a while. Great to see Silver and Snowfall on the same side, though I was a bit surprised by the interaction between Silver and her brother. ...
Apr 4, 2023 -
Re: Wetfire- Chapter eight
Hi again, really interesting chapter. I like you you are slowly connecting all the different characters you've been building up to this point. I am a bit confused as I ...
Mar 15, 2023 -
Re: The Lost City of Atlanits-Chapter one
Hi. That was a very interesting start. I'm not sure whether to say Leena is a spoiled brat or feel sorry for her. The grass always seems greener on the ...
Mar 10, 2023 -
Re: LMS VI: Something About Monsters - The Backrooms 2/2
Hi again, I just couldn't wait to see what happened next. "No. It couldn’t be real. But, the silhouette. None of the other voices had one" I knew the building ...
Mar 6, 2023 -
Re: LMS VI Something About Monsters - The Backrooms Part 1/2
Hi, I haven't reviewed a story this long yet so I apologise if I miss something or overexplain. This is also the first work of yours that I've read and ...
Mar 6, 2023 -
Re: King of the Court - 0
Hi, I love the passion that went into this story about basketball. First thing I wanted to mention was that I was a bit confused at first that 7th grade ...
Mar 5, 2023
