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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Scars In Blue: Part 1: Chapter 5: Shadows and Fire

    Wow, cool story! I really like the idea of a princess who can hear the voices of flames and the mystery of her father's disappearance. I decided to start with ...

    Sep 22, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fault

    Wow, ouch. This hit me in the feels. I totally relate to making everything my fault and blaming myself for the misdeeds of others. Thinking about it now we must ...

    Sep 11, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1

    Hi, cool story. Can't wait to see where this goes. This gave me strange Harry Potter vibes with the normal seeming world while a hidden magic world hides just beneath ...

    Sep 9, 2023
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Witch Trainee, the Prince, and the Blue Dragon

    What an incredible story! I like how you started by giving us the family situation of Yvonne. It really helped me understand the ending with the Hag's request and her ...

    Sep 9, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Dragon

    This story is very interesting. I originally decided to read it since I love dragons and often see them as very human like in their mannerisms. Very similar to your ...

    Sep 9, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Culture Re: Angels and Gargoyles

    Wow! I'm the kind of guy who loves a creature with a good heart and monstrous appearance. I've always believed that we judge too much on appearances and your poem ...

    Sep 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Other Re: Foxmaster- who is she really? intro

    Hi Foxmaster! Been a while. Right off the bat I wanted to ask if this is the character your profile was based on or vice versa. I was really excited ...

    Sep 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Wetfire- chapter 11

    Well... That was unexpected. Never before has a story upended my expectations as many times or as extremely as yours, while still keeping a semi-coherent storyline. So has Silver lost ...

    Jun 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Wetfire-chapter 10

    Hi again, It's been a long time since my last chapter of Wetfire. Nice cliffhanger. I love prophecies in stories. One of my favorite lines about them is "one often ...

    Jun 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Wetfire-Chapter Nine

    Hi again! It's been a while. Great to see Silver and Snowfall on the same side, though I was a bit surprised by the interaction between Silver and her brother. ...

    Apr 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wetfire- Chapter eight

    Hi again, really interesting chapter. I like you you are slowly connecting all the different characters you've been building up to this point. I am a bit confused as I ...

    Mar 15, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Lost City of Atlanits-Chapter one

    Hi. That was a very interesting start. I'm not sure whether to say Leena is a spoiled brat or feel sorry for her. The grass always seems greener on the ...

    Mar 10, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: LMS VI: Something About Monsters - The Backrooms 2/2

    Hi again, I just couldn't wait to see what happened next. "No. It couldn’t be real. But, the silhouette. None of the other voices had one" I knew the building ...

    Mar 6, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: LMS VI Something About Monsters - The Backrooms Part 1/2

    Hi, I haven't reviewed a story this long yet so I apologise if I miss something or overexplain. This is also the first work of yours that I've read and ...

    Mar 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: King of the Court - 0

    Hi, I love the passion that went into this story about basketball. First thing I wanted to mention was that I was a bit confused at first that 7th grade ...

    Mar 5, 2023


He who has a why to live for can bear almost any how.
— Fredrich Nietzche (Philosopher)