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Wow. I wish I had the courage to write something like this. I happen to be really struggling with self denial right now and am trying to practice fasting but ...

Hi, I am very interested to see how this relates to Wetfire. Perhaps that's why the Leafwing fell into the water? Either way, this story was very interesting on it's ...

Wow! This was awesome! I love how you used a real life experience like this. I've always found that your own experiences create the most passionate and enjoyable poetry. Most ...

Hi, I know this story already has a lot of reviews but I just had to talk about it since I love scenes like this so much. I won't mention ...

Yay! Another chapter of Wetfire! It felt like you rushed this one a bit and there were quite a few places that could have used more detail. Silver and Snowfall's ...

Hi, I was expecting the man to be down for the count but now we've got a whole bar fight to deal with. I love the way you described this ...

Oof! Straight through his skull? Dang, she's even stronger than I initially thought. Killing the guy wasn't that surprising I guess. He did kind of deserve it after all. (unless ...

This is a very interesting take on poetry. I have a few comments about the use of new lines and spaces in between, though I want to preface this with ...

Well, this was not what I was expecting after that prologue. Interesting concept and a futuristic feel that I really enjoyed. I love how it seemed so similar and yet ...

Great story. I really liked the message of this and it encouraged me. If you want some advice about your writing and style then this is what I have to ...

Cool story. I'm new here, what does LMSVI stand for? or is it LMS 6? I really liked the description in this story. It definitely gave off a cosmic scale ...

Wow. I mean really. Wow. As a Christian myself this really rocked me. I can't help but wonder what inspired you to write this. It has a true demonic feel ...

Even more intrigue. Good build up. This was great. Even more character building for Silver. Tsk, tsk for lying though. Lol. The grammar seemed a bit off in a few ...

Just gotta say I love how you crossed out heroic and replaced it with stupid at the start. (How did you do that?!) I like the rivalry Silver has with ...

Wow! So much is happening all of a sudden. Doesn't it just be like that sometimes though? Silver hasn't even gotten the chance to process her vision before all this ...