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That title lead me to expect something very different from this story. It really sounded like a fever dream at times and her last thoughts sounded like the beginning of ...

This was very good at drawing out emotions and empathy for the wolf and his lost family. It also left a lot of things ambiguous such as whether the young ...

Good cliff hanger bit is was a bit abrupt as well. The only other improvements I could think of are perhaps and explanation of the quote from 'Mother' (unless it ...