dragonight9

Hi! This looked intriguing so I thought I'd leave a few comments on it. Please note that these are suggestions and I try to find ways you can improve so ...

Hi again, I've been so excited to read this chapter so let's get right into it. As I'm reading through: I really like how you initially described Kita's surroundings. All ...

Hi again! Dragonight here to review another amazing chapter :) As I'm reading through: That was so interesting that the medicine actually worked (at least for a while) and then ...

Hi Raven, hope you're having a great day. Here's my review. As I'm reading through: I think your first sentence could have been worded a bit better though it still ...

Hi Raven, hope you're having a great day. Here's my review. As I'm reading through: Man I couldn't stop myself. I usually am able to find points to comment on ...

Hi Raven, can't wait to read more of your story. I forgot to mention this last time but I really like the cover art. Did you make it yourself or ...

Hi again, I'm really intrigued by this new character and the darkness within. As I'm reading through: I liked your description of Kita at the start, it set the mood ...

Hi, Dragonight here. I'm so excited to read your story. I'm not the best at reviews but I hope my comments help. What I noticed while reading: I really liked ...

I really like this poem. I was able to feel the sadness and loss expressed by the disappearing natural beauty of the stars. The conception of the stars as old ...

Hi, I hope you're have a great day/week. First of all, I really liked the story you told though this poem. I used to have those glow-in-the-dark stars in my ...

Hi, I am a psychology student who is bad at writing essays so take my advice with that in mind. I really like this topic which is why I'm leaving ...

Hi, I haven't read your work before but it seems pretty interesting. First I wanted to comment that this may be a hard read for some people since it seems ...

Hi, Dragonight here to review this awesome chapter. Overall comments: I love works with dragons in them so I read this piece and enjoyed it so much I also read ...

Just wanted to say I liked the dragon portion of this chapter a lot. You have a very good way of describing what is happening in a full bodied way. ...

I love it! Don't want to misinterpret your work but you totally described how God loves us with this piece so that's how I'm going to view it. I really ...