dragonrider

Good job on this piece but I feel like it could use some work. I understand it's about love and a breakup but I did not feel any real purpose ...

I just fell in love with this poem. It was pretty fantastic. I loved the writing, the flow, the diction, and the message behind it. I just loved it. The ...

Oh there are a few words that are stuck together--those are typos.

I loved this story! It was well-thought out, organized well, and intriguing to read. The ending was amazing, and I didn't see any grammar mistakes. Hope to find more of ...

This is the improvement from "What am I"

Sorry, I tried fixing it guys, it's not working. The question marks are usually substituting commas and quotation markes.

thank you for the review. Yeah, something went wrong with the format or something. I didn't put that many question marks. Sorry for the confusion!

Thanks for your opinions you guys. To clear some of the confusion (well, true I could/should have cleared some of it up), what I was trying to do in the ...

Sorry, I screwed something up in my review. What I meant by "yucky" I meant the ending was just like a "cut-off". It was a poor ending. Like ending a ...

I LOVED this poem. It's really good. The change in the character is beautiful. It's awesome. But, some sentences didn't flow right. But I LOVED the magnesium part. (lol) Keep ...

I really enjoyed this. It was a bit short though and some lines you might want to revise and fix. Good job. Keep on writing! Dragon Rider

I really enjoyed it. Impressive ending. Very well done! Keep on writing! Dragon Rider

Very, very bittersweet and enjoyable. Keep on writing! Dragon Rider

Interesting . . . it's good, but you could have been a little extensive. Great ending. Keep on writing! Dragon Rider

Really good. Only a couple sentences didn't flow as smoothly as others. Dragon Rider