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Hey! Dreams here! First of all, I liked this a lot, although, I agree with jDawn in how you need to avoid run on sentences. Death's hollow eyes followed the ...

- Characters. The brother is a mystery to me, tell me a little about him in the first chapter. Make something up, like how much he hated the Morphilians' for ...

Hi! I agree completely with NepoGirl up there. It was good yet it lacked description. Points - Be more descriptive really show us what is going on here and put ...

That's fun! Now I'm in the mood for rice crispies. * Raids the kitchen and comes back with a box* Okay, so enjoyed it a lot! Crunchy, crispy, hence their ...