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So I made a mistake; granted I know . The hardest thing I've ever done; losing you . I remember the way your arms caressed me. They held me close ...

So I've got this essay due .. well on monday actually, but if anyone has time to quickly read through and see if there's any spelling mistakes, or grammar etc, ...

Poetry is- a vast galaxy; harbouring many ideas. Those who call to her are enlightened by many possibilities. The flowing words; stars, whispering and humming. They span over a cerulean ...

Wow! There's nothing to say other than I am amazed by this poem! It was really really well written! Everything flowed nicely, and was described to a T. Try...light. Good ...

Hello! I rather enjoyed your poem! I really liked the idea you were going for. Just a few things to point out [my notes are bolded], Two can play that ...

Hello! Your poem was really interesting! I enjoyed it, I really like how you incorporated the french in along with the english. It was very unique. I think you could ...

Wow! Your poem was truly captivating. The way you described everything seemed to work really well. The one thing I think you should elaborate more on is why you find ...

Thank you! I really appreciated your criticism! I'll fix up that one line because I agree with your advice. -Avery. (:

This is the first poem I've published here and it's not my usual kind of poem, so I'm a little nervous.. Steps; blocks of concrete stone. Steps; on which I ...

Wow! I really liked your poem! It was well said and extremely enjoyable to read! The one thing I didn't like was this line; Holding my hand as tightly as ...

Hey! I really enjoyed your poem and I think it has great potential! However, there are a few things I would recommend fixing up. I am everywhere where you are ...

Hey! I really this poem, I was absorbed pretty much the moment I started reading it. The style was truly captivating and everything flowed smoothly. There was, however, one bit ...

Wow, I really liked your piece! I don't really think there is much to be said other than well done. You described everything perfectly. The last line was very cute. ...