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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Pleading to a Wet Sun

    Wow! There's nothing to say other than I am amazed by this poem! It was really really well written! Everything flowed nicely, and was described to a T. Try...light. Good ...

    Feb 20, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: dead wrong

    Hello! I rather enjoyed your poem! I really liked the idea you were going for. Just a few things to point out [my notes are bolded], Two can play that ...

    Feb 20, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Marionette Hearts

    Hello! Your poem was really interesting! I enjoyed it, I really like how you incorporated the french in along with the english. It was very unique. I think you could ...

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Africa

    Wow! Your poem was truly captivating. The way you described everything seemed to work really well. The one thing I think you should elaborate more on is why you find ...

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: letting go

    Wow! I really liked your poem! It was well said and extremely enjoyable to read! The one thing I didn't like was this line; Holding my hand as tightly as ...

    Feb 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Who Am I

    Hey! I really enjoyed your poem and I think it has great potential! However, there are a few things I would recommend fixing up. I am everywhere where you are ...

    Feb 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Smothered with Splinters

    Hey! I really this poem, I was absorbed pretty much the moment I started reading it. The style was truly captivating and everything flowed smoothly. There was, however, one bit ...

    Feb 10, 2009


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