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Re: Pleading to a Wet Sun
Wow! There's nothing to say other than I am amazed by this poem! It was really really well written! Everything flowed nicely, and was described to a T. Try...light. Good ...
Feb 20, 2009 -
Re: dead wrong
Hello! I rather enjoyed your poem! I really liked the idea you were going for. Just a few things to point out [my notes are bolded], Two can play that ...
Feb 20, 2009 -
Re: Marionette Hearts
Hello! Your poem was really interesting! I enjoyed it, I really like how you incorporated the french in along with the english. It was very unique. I think you could ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: Africa
Wow! Your poem was truly captivating. The way you described everything seemed to work really well. The one thing I think you should elaborate more on is why you find ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: letting go
Wow! I really liked your poem! It was well said and extremely enjoyable to read! The one thing I didn't like was this line; Holding my hand as tightly as ...
Feb 11, 2009 -
Re: Who Am I
Hey! I really enjoyed your poem and I think it has great potential! However, there are a few things I would recommend fixing up. I am everywhere where you are ...
Feb 11, 2009 -
Re: Smothered with Splinters
Hey! I really this poem, I was absorbed pretty much the moment I started reading it. The style was truly captivating and everything flowed smoothly. There was, however, one bit ...
Feb 10, 2009
