dystopianmonkey01

Hi Tiana here for a review. I really like this poem. It's got a dark and kinda film noir vibe about it. I love your use of cynicism and sarcasm ...

Thanks Sharon :)

Thanks Sharon :)

I have strabismus too! Totally empathise. Good poem by the way

Thanks very much :)

Thanks very much Kal. You're right - it should have gone under spiritual oops. The line "Ricochet off the periphery and permeate into the deep inner", was me trying to ...

Thanks heaps for your review - I appreciate it. The whole thing is about being homosexual. Re-read it keeping that in mind and see the meaning change. TBH I'm quite ...

Thanks Ty much appreciated!

Thanks Kayla. The specs of ivory are self harm scars. The person I am writing this about is dark skinned yet her scars are ivory in colour. I hope this ...

okay sorry

I never said it has to be, I said for it to be classified as informal, it fits the Satire genre.

hey, thanks for your review. yes i did use 'forget me not' as the flower as well... for like a double meaning, i've used pollen and tendrils to link to ...

Lol. Yep

Thanks for your review! I'm not a slam poet, but now that you mentioned it, I do agree that this sounds great spoken! (it was meant to be a prose ...

Thank you!