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Cut me again, and again. Cut me till I bleed. Cut me off from you. Cut me to my death. No! Don't stop. You have hurt me before is it ...

This was written last summer maybe? “How are you then Alana?” Maddy questioned me. She had probably noticed how sad and down I was. But the truth is I couldn’t ...

Hey I am here to review :) Just a few nit picks when i circled around I should be a capital letter. all i could think is there Again here./b] ...

Hello I am here to help :) Just a few nit picks my train sets., and This should just be a commar rather than a fullstop followed by a commar. ...

This is some lyrics, that could be used for any occasion, for succeeding, but I wrote them because I have just passed my piano exam so this is how I ...

Heya, :lol: Your song title is very catchy, and the whole idea of what you have chosen to write about is also very good. However, some parts are a little ...

Please can I have feedback, it's the first set of lyrics I have ever written, and I am wondering whether I should continue.... You are nothing without me, I set ...

I think it is a good song, which flows nicely. I can imagine a tune running through my head, which creates a good atmousphere. Me , myself. I am not ...

I totally understand where you are coming from with this. I understand what songs you listen to, but I haven't heard many for I find them quite rare and unusual, ...

I think it is good :lol: but very repetitive some of the wording is also not quite there yet. But it has potential to be amazing but it's your chorus ...

thankyou everyone for your comments so far, you have all been really helpful, I really appriciate it.

Right, I am a lyricist lol :) I love writing lyrics and If you aren't a lyricist you should do that aswell, they are great for starters. To be honest, ...

Hi everyone, I wrote some idie lyrics, and I was wondering what you all think and how I could improve them. When I got back from school, my mum was ...

I agree with Sakura Brilliant

Hi everyone, I wrote this when I was 12. But I want to know what you think of it, and how I can improve, thankyou. My Book Review My book ...