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Hey I am here to review :) Just a few nit picks when i circled around I should be a capital letter. all i could think is there Again here./b] ...

Hello I am here to help :) Just a few nit picks my train sets., and This should just be a commar rather than a fullstop followed by a commar. ...

Heya, :lol: Your song title is very catchy, and the whole idea of what you have chosen to write about is also very good. However, some parts are a little ...

I think it is a good song, which flows nicely. I can imagine a tune running through my head, which creates a good atmousphere. Me , myself. I am not ...

I totally understand where you are coming from with this. I understand what songs you listen to, but I haven't heard many for I find them quite rare and unusual, ...

I think it is good :lol: but very repetitive some of the wording is also not quite there yet. But it has potential to be amazing but it's your chorus ...

Right, I am a lyricist lol :) I love writing lyrics and If you aren't a lyricist you should do that aswell, they are great for starters. To be honest, ...

Hello, This poem is interesting, very interesting! In my opinion, in a way emo sounding. Unfortuantly, that feel ruins the idea of it all, changing a few phrases that make ...

Hello, I find that poem very interesting, very dramatic. But, for that type of poem, maybe, a little on the short side, but that is easily corrected. Also, balencing, and ...