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  • Romantic Novels Re: Let Me Love You(15)

    I really liked it! I didn't see any errors. Plus I think the previous comments covered all the mistakes, so yeah. :) I was wondering about the phrases that were ...

    May 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Love Has No Boundaries (I) {EDITED*}

    Hi! Okay, before I say anything else, I have one question. Where is the romance? I mean, it sounds like it could lead up into to romance somewhere later on, ...

    May 16, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Saved on the Killer Mountain- Chapter Three

    On the second floor, Peter waited outside of a small office. Suddenly, a large man with broad shoulders, and a rough face, opened the office door and looked down on ...

    May 15, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Your request makes me so happy!

    Hi! Uh, I'm writing a novel, and it's under general fiction. It's titled Saved on the Killer Mountain . Could you please review it? I mean, it already has like ...

    May 15, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: And so it begins!

    Hi! I'm Emily! I've been on here for a good while, so I can explain things to you if needed. Anyway, what kind of things do you like to write? ...

    May 14, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My place.

    Oh my gosh! Awesomest poem ever! This is better than some of the poems I had to analyze for school! I love the ABCB rhyme thing. Like I have mentioned ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: My Doodlebug

    I'm really sorry about your horse! :( At first when I was reading it, I was thinking about a dog or something, then at the end, I was like, "Oh! ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Morning murders.

    This is a really good poem! I love how it's about murder. Is it specifically about hiring an assassin or something? I, personally, enjoy reading poem about death and killing. ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Spinning

    I loved this poem! At first glance, I was like, "Oh gosh. It's a long poem, and it's going to be really boring." But after reading it, I was like, ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Feel Nothing

    I had no issues with it, and I saw no mistakes or errors. It is very well-written. Actually, it reminds me of my friend who just recently went through a ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Well, here I am!

    Thanks! I would talk to my counselors about it, but in truth, the counselors kinda creep me out. They just give off that wired vibe whenever they're around. I don't ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hallo

    Hi! It's nice to meet you. So, I guess you like writing, right? Most likely. Editing is fun. I personally don't think of it as a hobby though. Do you ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Well, here I am!

    Thanks for your words of wisdom! The high school I'm going to does offer AP classes, but only to the higher grades. No ninth graders allowed! :) Anyway, I guess ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Heartbreak

    This poem is awesome! I like the title. It fits. I didn't see any grammatical errors or anything. So, yeah. I didn't have any personal issues with it. Overall, it ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: That delicate touch.

    I really liked this poem! And, as an added bonus, it was appropriate to read today since it's mother's day. The whole time I was reading it, I was like, ...

    May 9, 2010


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites