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Re: Fear
Hello twin. Ehte here for the review. I often wonder how, Or why, People can just stand there, people just stand there, As they watch another cry, as they watch ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Forbidden Love
Hello December. I am here for the review. Staring back at his pictures not being able to stop the pain You break this into two lines from pictures onwards. That ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Time
Hello there. I am here for the review and we shall directly get down to you. Yesterday I was a sprout, Youthful, young, taintless and unblemished. This line is too ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Doodles #1
Kid Evil:Cute version Check the original version of Kid Evil here Rico
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: The Past, The Present And The Revenge Chapter 1
Chapter 1: Everything is normal Timeline: The scene starts seven years from the defeat of Omega Shenron. Goku has left with Shenron and the present incharge of the Z family ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Geeks
Hello JRaye. When i first saw the title i was totally looking forward to it and then when i saw it i was a bit disappointed because it is a ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Cupcake
OMG. I LOVE CUPCAKES. You just made my day. There is nothing better than a poem like this(and that also on CUPCAKE!) to relax you after a hectic schedule. I ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Despair.
Hello there ruby. I am here for the review. You poem has a good flow which makes it sound good while reading it out but i do have some nitpicks. ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: The Mountains
I went to the mountains a few days ago... I took some photographs though i am not so good at it. But then also i am putting these up for ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: You and Me
Hello there Merry. Welcome to YWS. :) I am here for the review of your poem. I hope that it will help you to improve. Sometimes it seems to me ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: 5 Poems That Start With "S" - Shoes
Hello there rose. I am here for the review. After looking at your title i thought that it consisted 5 poems which started with "S" but it only has one. ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: First Love
I have finally come up with something after a long writers block. And i did not expect that it could have been a lyric but here it is.... I am ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: Profanity
Hello there Jennya !! I am here for the review. But it will not be anything like a review because i do not think anything should be changed in this ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: A Tribute to the Lost
Hello there. I am here for the review. So lets straight away get down to the review. The lights pulse in purples and blues As the speakers shake with sound ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Should Actors Fall in Love?
Hello there i am here for the review. Well, you have a good piece here but your poem was a bit on the predictable side. Some of the rhymes were ...
Feb 27, 2011