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10 ~~~~~ Oh my gosh - I had the sudden urge to attempt to finish this. So, 20-something-odd poems in... 2 days? Possible? YES IT IS. This is... okay, so ...

All of those are done.

Here to review as requested. ^^ And, you said not to go easy on you, so I won't. (I probably wouldn't anyways, knowing me. xD But okay.) First of all. ...

Okay, so, the second poem which I totally DID NOT forget to review yesterday! oo" (Actually no seriously, I didn't forget, I just got kicked off of the computer before ...

Hey Host! ^^ Here to review as requested. So, the first thing I noticed about this poem is how typical it is. I'll start by saying that yes, break-ups and ...

Chapter 2! Okay... so still, I adore this story, and I'm not quite sure of how helpful this will be - Dara's still Dara, after all, and Ma is still ...

Hi Twit! Here to review as requested. ^^ You have... a lot of reviews already, so sorry in advance if I repeat the others too much. First thing's first: Did ...

Finished!

Okay, chapter 2! Right away, I'll say that I thought the same about this chapter. It seemed a bit more dull than I thought it would be, because I know ...

Hey Unicorn! Here to review as requested. ^^ First thing's first - I don't know if I love this or like it or if it's just... okay quite yet. Why? ...

Hello Cad, here to review as requested. ^^ This poem has.... potential? I guess? - But I'm really sorry to say that I didn't enjoy it much at all. It ...

Hi PinkAngel! Here to review as requested. ^^ First off, I suppose that I'll go into nitpicks (In the spoiler): They were kept in the old slave forts. Mickey and ...

Both are done. ^^

DDD: But I love you Kammy! EVERYBODY. Stop bullying Kammy. D: .... *snickers*

Hi Eli! ^-^ Here as requested! (Sorry it took a little longer than I expected. xD) First of all - I am going to say that I disagree with Tin ...