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Milky, we're going to start soon. I need Emmy to log on so I can ask her a few quick questions and then we will make the first to posts. ...

Isha here to review. :) The first thing I want to say was that I actually really did like this. Like Purple said, you forgot to capitalize a few 'i's' ...

Elinia Whoever had been standing in front of us was now flat on the ground, dead. Or maybe he was just sleeping... I mentally slapped myself. Sleeping? No, he was ...

Alright here people, it's time to revive this. :P Get posting!! =D *cracks whip* (If you need help, PM me and I'll be glad to give you suggestions.)

Kayin I paused by the door to the captain's quarters, frowning slightly. Ben was in there, I recognized his voice easily enough. I was debating whether or not I would ...

Hey, Isha here to review. :) The first thing I would like to point out is your first paragraph: I slammed my locker in a hurry. Today was Tuesday and ...

Hey, Isha here to review! I want to start by saying that this has a good flow, and the occasional flash of fresh imagery. There was a line that really ...

Letharoo, you smell like a rotting pig corpse and you look like an alligator that's been dipped in acid and rolled in poo. :) (No. That is NOT a good ...

Hey, Isha here to review. :) The first thing I want to say about this poem is that it's not bad, but it's not incredible, either. It has some fresh ...

Oh my gosh Fluffy xD Do you have any idea how much you made me laugh while I read this? I was going to be cool and write you a ...

Markuus I paused, glancing back at Evi. There was no way she was going to be able to get out of here on her own, and I wasn't going to ...

Hello, Isha here to review. ^-^ All right, so to start off I would like to say that you said at first, "This needs work." I have to agree. You ...

Anzeila I paused for a moment to bite my lip and glance up the hall hesitantly. He was right, of course. Most men probably wouldn't be as king as he ...

Yes, I am finally posting xD Markuus I gritted my teeth, arms crossed, legs propped on one chair and my butt planted in another. My eyes werre narrowed to slits, ...

Hey, Isha here to review. :) First off, I would like to say that the lack of punctuation and capitilization is the first thing that threw me off. Even before ...