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Yeah, it's kind of mysterious. I'm trying to let people imagine what the world is like. Also, he'll probably learn about the megagene later, it's supposed to be mysterious. But ...

Thanks for the suggestions, I'm going to go over and break up the really long paragraphs now. And about Ash's personality, you kind of learn about her later, but I ...

Thanks, that means a lot to me!

Thanks!

This is truly a beautiful and emotional poem, it has soul, depth, and mystery. There is one thing I would like to comment upon though, you might want to use ...