ellaskye

Thank you! I wasn't really concentrating on grammar or much else when I wrote this because I was, of course, half asleep. I do some editing!

Thanks! Great feedback. I'll do some editing, for I was, of course, half asleep when I wrote this. :)

You did a great job rendering your thoughts and putting them into words. I love it! Very deep and true.

haunting! i love how you put the situation in real life into a beautiful, symbolic poem ish thing! mad props to you

really cool! i think the beginning could be a little more poetic like the end but to help the flow but I STILL LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!