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Re: The Definition of Love
HEY! So this story is very good and you should write another. I saw some grammar mistakes. I'm Sorry about that , " I said " Something came over me ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: What Not To Do (1)
~~Hi kakagirl! I really liked this peice. I'm not going to correct your grammar, because there was a lot of basic mistakes that I saw were corrected by other users. ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: The Tale of Two Worlds
Hi Day! WOW! I can honestly say I was glued to my computer screen the entire time I read this. It was very intersting and I agree about developing the ...
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: The Runner
THE RUNNER Feet thumping across pavement, His heart racing, lungs pumping. I'm flying! he thinks. Nothing can stop him now, He's invincible! He is having the love affair he once ...
Sep 20, 2010