emilybwrites

sorry rhyming is tough for me, free verse comes easily to me

wow. this was very deep. i could really feel your feelings! my favorite line was "what if you cared?". great explanation of our feelings! keep up the great work

i thought this was really good! kind of Shakespeare-like but it was fantastic! i could really picture the "trembling trickle" which was great alliteration. it was a bit confusing in ...

this was a great piece!i could tell it took a lot of time to perfect. it had good imagery but remember to capitalize the first word of the sentence after ...

this was fantastic keep up the great work! please read my work and follow me!!!

thanks :)

this was great! it had fantastic imagery.